When I Dropped Out At 20, My Sister Told Everyone: “She’s The One Who Didn’t Finish.” Twelve Years Later, I’m Yale’s Dean Of Admissions. One Essay Read: “My Family Moved Past My Aunt’s Setback.” The Name? Amanda Chen. My Niece. I Picked Up My Red Pen And…

reached the essay. He reread sections. He went back to the activity list. He finished and set the file down carefully. “Strong applicant,” he said. “Really strong. Even without the essay she’s competitive. With the essay, she’s special.” “The family conflict?” he asked. “The aunt in the essay is me.” Marcus let out a low whistle and leaned back. “That,continue reading …